That was hilarious, my only criticism is on your audio, there's a lot of noise.
That was hilarious, my only criticism is on your audio, there's a lot of noise.
Thank you very much. Yeah my good mic just died so i had to record with my headset. sorry for that ^^
I love sprite fights! Backgrounds, work on them. Honestly it just looks like you've slapped your art on top of a 5 year old's finger painting. You can never go wrong with sprites but the wrong background can turn into an eyesore. I would work on that dont be afraid of asking around the forums for help on this.
Lol, I understand clearly what you mean. I agree, But it's hard for me to find high quality sprite backgrounds.
//btw, didn't know much sprite animators still existed on NG. where in the forum can i find help?//
I really like it's premise! you just need to work on your VO. Don't be afraid to ask for help by our other users here on the forum or PM
If VO stands for "voice over", then yeah, I know it's not great. There's only so much I can do about that though... might ask other people to do voice acting for me on longer animations.
Very good usage of a gif, animation and audio sync.
Thanks, it was scary, making this
slow pace but still a solid animation
Thanks buddy. You are right, I still need to work on timing, is tricky, I need more experience and time to experiment :)
the animation could be smoother; overall: awesome! the sound quality: not sure if it's from my connection but I thought it could have been better, try using a different encoder next time. keep it up man! I hope to see more awesome work from you
I think I own shitty speakers too because I can't really tell how bad it is, but everyones telling me its crappy so it has to be. I will try some new encoders before I upload again. Thank you for the advice and the support!
I have no idea what it is about this show that has people drawn to it, and even caused "bronies" to appear. So my review is somewhat biased. none the less just work up on cleaning up the animation and work on your audio, maybe use some of the music here on newgrounds instead of the prelude from final fantasy. also seriously change the narrator. I could barely hear you and you need to learn how to inflect your voice (change pitch) it's both monotone and boring. Maybe you should look into having some of the NG Voice Actors do it for you after all collaboration is what this site is all about. I'm going to pass this animation because I can see that you took the time and effort to make this. I sincerly hope you take my advice and contact some of the animators, artist, musicians and VOs here on newgrounds for your future projects
I greatly appreciate the advice on it, this is actually an edit to the voice, the other had complaints from almost every person about the monotone voice and narration, so this is a step higher than our last post. As for the music, i didnt even think about using NG, for some reason never thought about it to tell the truth. For animation, we are more of a 2 man group. Not really asking people to help us with the animation. We've made it this far with little to no help in the prgram and we'll most likely keep it that way unless absolutely nessessary. Everything is being taken into great concideration. And no ones perfect, there is no way to get absolutel flawlessness and have literally everything that one pictures to come true on sites like this, thats why we keep trying. Thanks for the comment, and the advice. *Noted*
not bad
but i think your links voice needs to be a tad bit more dynamic the voice was a little droll and monotonous but over all it was a great movie
No YOU'RE droll and monotonous but overall a great movie!
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