brujeria's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jade vs Liun Kang Fatalit]

Sólido trabajo. Yo sugeriría que acelerar el ritmo de la animación y alisando; no vuelva a usar cuadros de animación con demasiada frecuencia, también se necesita trabajar en la consistencia de su trabajo. Puedo ver que usted pone en el tiempo para algunas de las escenas y otros sentías a medias. Le sugiero preguntar por ahí para obtener asesoramiento sobre cómo hacerlo en este sitio.

[Good Deeds]

slow pace but still a solid animation

aliascartoons responds:

Thanks buddy. You are right, I still need to work on timing, is tricky, I need more experience and time to experiment :)

[Buy Wards You Feeders]

the animation could be smoother; overall: awesome! the sound quality: not sure if it's from my connection but I thought it could have been better, try using a different encoder next time. keep it up man! I hope to see more awesome work from you

RetroSleep responds:

I think I own shitty speakers too because I can't really tell how bad it is, but everyones telling me its crappy so it has to be. I will try some new encoders before I upload again. Thank you for the advice and the support!

[Regular Lobby.]

Hilarious, you just need to expand on this. I'm sure you can make a compilation on all the people who freak out on FPS games

[the French are invading]

It's a nice little animation i'l give you that. But your going to want to put more work into your projects if you want them on this site. Still don't be discouraged to post your works in progress into this site for review and criticism. I suggest making use of the forums and project system. Make some friends and have them review your stuff before submitting them for publication.

Also, you did a pretty good job with the voice over. it could use some improvement but still pretty good. It came out nice and clear and wasn't entirely too loud. Your acting on the other hand needs improvement. keep it up!

Slapland responds:

Thanks, this was just a crappy thing I made on my I pad a while ago, and there's been great improvement to both the effort and quality of my animations. And again thanks for your review, I really appreciate it

[Airplane Mode]

I feel like you can expand a bit more on this. It's great overall and even made me laugh alittle. I get a sense that you are a starting animator on this site, if so, keep up the good work. some things you might want to look into improving are: frame rate, audio, and art. Vague, I know, but I don't think i should go into too much detail with my criticism since it would be wasted if you didn't improve.

keep making videos and I look forward to your work

["Fall From Grace" MLP:FIM]

I have no idea what it is about this show that has people drawn to it, and even caused "bronies" to appear. So my review is somewhat biased. none the less just work up on cleaning up the animation and work on your audio, maybe use some of the music here on newgrounds instead of the prelude from final fantasy. also seriously change the narrator. I could barely hear you and you need to learn how to inflect your voice (change pitch) it's both monotone and boring. Maybe you should look into having some of the NG Voice Actors do it for you after all collaboration is what this site is all about. I'm going to pass this animation because I can see that you took the time and effort to make this. I sincerly hope you take my advice and contact some of the animators, artist, musicians and VOs here on newgrounds for your future projects

LessThanNormal responds:

I greatly appreciate the advice on it, this is actually an edit to the voice, the other had complaints from almost every person about the monotone voice and narration, so this is a step higher than our last post. As for the music, i didnt even think about using NG, for some reason never thought about it to tell the truth. For animation, we are more of a 2 man group. Not really asking people to help us with the animation. We've made it this far with little to no help in the prgram and we'll most likely keep it that way unless absolutely nessessary. Everything is being taken into great concideration. And no ones perfect, there is no way to get absolutel flawlessness and have literally everything that one pictures to come true on sites like this, thats why we keep trying. Thanks for the comment, and the advice. *Noted*

[ZTV News Episode 1]

The writing for your newscast is no joke, the highlight of my month and the voicing is phenominal! It's a tad short but that's probably because you've just started doing it. I hope to see more of your cast and hopefully added segments.

[VALV Halloween 2010]

Excellent work once again

I am writing my review in English to let all the English speakers out there that yes I too think the video would be enjoyable in English, but I also speak Spanish and I can tell you all without a doubt that Mexican Spanish is highly contextual and a lot of our sayings don't have an English equivalent and the jokes are lost in translation. This would be a case of "It sucks to be you for not knowing more than one language", as for me; I know 5.

[C. Crashing Troll Boss]

I'd give it..

a few more sound effects, too much dead space (not the game It's what you call the time in between audio )